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Like a Polar bear eating a seal. Jenifer eats any living thing in her way to survive. A predator is an organism that lives by preying on other organism. Jenifer can be considered more of a predator than parasite. I think Jenifer is a predator because she puts fear into people’s eyes and makes them feel hopeless. But before people see her face they think she’s just a regular girl that needs help, this can be a way towards attacking her pray so that sooner or later she can live of it by eating it. As a human would see a polar bear and think they were so cute that they would want to pet them, would only lead to a mistake. The polar bear doesn’t do anything and just waits for the moment so they can strike and eat you. Almost like Jenifer that stocks its prey and waits till the moment is right. We can see Jenifer act like a predator when she had a body of a man she killed put in her freezer so she can eat when she’s hungry. Also when Jim wanted to give Jenifer up she convinced him by crying and giving him a sad face, which made Jim feel bad and took her back home to the farm, that same time she ended up kidnapping a boy and eating him. Jennifer is also like a predator because predators are known to getting rid of their competition that they see is dangerous to them. Clearly, Jenifer got rid of the cat that was in jim house, and she also got rid of jim wife by makin her move out the house with his kids, only leaving her with Jim. That is why Jenifer fits more into the predator category, shes an organism that moves from one to another to live of them, they kill to live.
How does your reason for thinking she's a predator make her one? How does it fit with definition of predator? Also, proofread, and missing concluding sentence.
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